Wow

I really love these types of flash. The music made me think or those video games you get and you're in an entirely new world. But I love how abstract this movie is!
Good work!

Not bad

Of course it wouldn't make the front page or anything, but for a firt time flash This was really good. Keep it up and you'll end up like other top artists.

I really liked it

I liked how it's just a bubble and triangle, it reminds me of David Firth. You should make future flash movies of this kind of stuff it's really fun.

Hey

I remember playing a game JUST like this on Play Station 1. Was it called Providence? because I can't find it :P. Good job though!

Ya man. Finish it. If it were my song, I would ease off on the sidechaining a little.

Hey. I like the piano! and also the lead that comes in at 0:20 and also the one that comes behind it. However the supersaw that comes in 0:30 doesn't vibe with me. It's too harsh in my opinion. and then things get really muddy at 0:40. I think that's because the final instrument you introduced takes up alot of space on the frequency spectrum and needs to be equalized. When I first started if found that I would stack too many instruments on top of each other and then you couldn't really hear what was going on. Recently I've started to limit the amount of instruments of playing at the same time. Well it's not so much the number of instruments rather than how they all balance across the frequency spectrum, and how you mix them with equalization, panning, and other things.
I like the musicality of this piece! You should turn it into a longer song!
Keep making music!

The intro is really nice and catchy. I agree with TheDoor6 about the synth at around 1:01 being too loud. It's really sharp on the ears. The first transition is wonderful. That calm part is just gorgeous. I think the transition back to the synth at 2:46 could have been better, it was really abrupt. by 4:00 I'm getting really tired of that lead. The calm part is really nice to hear again. I love this song for the intro and the relaxing parts. I couldn't get into the other parts though.